Pretty good!

Could use more dynamics. Quiet parts need to be quieter, loud parts MUCH more dramatic. Try using a little sub during the climaxes, and bring out the top end a little. Too middy for me.
Of course, those are all personal preferences.

Very nice piece sir, downloaded. =]

Decent

Good remix... but in my opinion, her voice should be louder, and the song should overall be a little bit cleaner, there's too much fuzz on the high end.

Very nice.

9/10 5/5 Good stuff, could have a tad bit more variety, but great otherwise!